The wild animal fight!
Characters: Lion, Woolly and Hedgehog.
One very sunny day, there was a sheep called Woolly. He lived in a paddock all by himself in the middle of nowhere. He only had grass and water with an old rusty fence surrounding him.
One day a hedgehog snuck under the fence and he made a giant, big hole. Then a lion got through the hole in the fence. Woolly was not happy and got into a fight with lion. But lion was stronger and he attacked the sheep! They fought with their teeth and paws. Sheep had no more wool and lion had lost his mane. Hedgehog and lion both walked out, and all three of them learned their lesson!
They became good friends, and decided to go on a big adventure together to find some more wool and a mane. On their way, they saw hedgehog and he had collected all the wool that sheep had lost in the fight. He gave it back to Wooly. He was so happy. They kept walking to find lion's mane.
Surprisingly they found a mane for lion. It was hidden in a bush. It was an orangey tan colour. They started to walk all the way back to the paddock and hedgehog followed them along. When they got back to the paddock and got their wool and mane back on. They were as good as new. They bonded perfectly. They all lived happily ever after.
The end!
Hi Ashlyn, I'm Honey from Marshland school :D. I really like your story! Did you make it by yourself? I love the pictures you put to match the story,the hedgehog was sooo cute!! Also the pictures made you picture the story more clearly. This story made me think about the times my hat would blow off in the wind and we had to go find it. Next time maybe you should about more description. But otherwise it was such a cute story, well done. From Honey ;D
ReplyDeleteHi Ashlyn, I am Angelica from Marshland School I really like The story, The hedgehog,lion and the sheep sound very cute, It was also cute on how you added the pictures the looked very interesting,
ReplyDeleteMaybe you should add some more pictures on the side.