Hi Ashlyn! My name is Arielle I am from Waikowhai Primary school my room is called Waitamata. I really like your blog post about The Sloth Play. I think that your play was good because it had events like, Trouble,The Tree, The disaster, The house makeover,fixing the tree and end result. I also liked how you did the part were the builder was lazy and all the other sloths did the work I think it taught the other sloths a lesson of working together. I thought you could add a bit more detail to the story then just speaking. Then overall I loved every part of your play if you want to see mine go to https://wpsariellem.blogspot.com/ Well LOVE your post blog ya later!!
Hi Ashlyn! My name is Arielle I am from Waikowhai Primary school my room is called Waitamata. I really like your blog post about The Sloth Play. I think that your play was good because it had events like, Trouble,The Tree, The disaster, The house makeover,fixing the tree and end result. I also liked how you did the part were the builder was lazy and all the other sloths did the work I think it taught the other sloths a lesson of working together. I thought you could add a bit more detail to the story then just speaking. Then overall I loved every part of your play if you want to see mine go to https://wpsariellem.blogspot.com/ Well LOVE your post blog ya later!!
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