Hi Ashlyn, this is Zana from the summer learning journey. Good job with your similes they are very creative! Just remember your similes need to compare two things so instead of she acts like a winner you could make it she is as cool as a winner or she is as excited as a winner. It is also fun to do them about people you know, like Ashlyn is as cool as a cucumber. Ngā mihi nui, Zana Yates
Hi Ashlyn, this is Zana from the summer learning journey. Good job with your similes they are very creative! Just remember your similes need to compare two things so instead of she acts like a winner you could make it she is as cool as a winner or she is as excited as a winner. It is also fun to do them about people you know, like Ashlyn is as cool as a cucumber.
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Zana Yates